We are learning to describe. I found it easy to use adjectives because I had a lot of things to describe. I found it tricky to start a sentence with a verb because I have never done it before.
Turning up to the lake, I grabbed the fishing rods out of the back of the ute. Running over to the jetty, the lake was glassy and the air was chilly. I felt excited because I was always waiting for this moment. Pulling the silver reel, I flicked the little fish like lure over my head. Then I waited for the hits of the trout with the hope that it was a 10 pounder. Slowly reeling it back in I felt a sudden snag. It was a whole lot of weed. I was gutted. As I pulled the weed off, I cast it back out.
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